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14th of January - Thousand Of These Days This morning I woke up a bit earlier than usual, I prepared with care and abundance the breakfast and went to wake up my love. I caressed his head and I genlty moved the duvet so I could go into his bed. I hugged him half asleep and I kissed his temple. He turned and smiled to me. My love today is eight years old and I wanted that his first feeling today was the unconditional warmth and love of a mother. Happy Birthday, my Treasure.

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14th of January - ThousandS Of These Days

This morning I woke up a bit earlier than usual. I prepared A LARGE BREAKFAST with care and abundance the breakfast and went to wake up my love. I caressed his head and I genlty GENTLY moved the duvet so I could go GET into his bed. I hugged him AS HE LAY half asleep and I kissed his temple. He turned and smiled to me. My love today is eight years old and I wanted that his first feeling today was WOULD BE the unconditional warmth and love of a HIS mother.
Happy Birthday, my Treasure.

Bellissima! Tanti auguri a lui. Veramente e' fortunato avere una madre come te.

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14th of January - Thousand Of These Days

This morning I woke up a bit earlier than usual. I prepared with care and abundance the sumptuous breakfast with care, then and went to wake up my love. I caressed his head and I genlty moved the duvet so I could get into his bed. I hugged him with him still half asleep and I kissed his temple. He turned and smiled to me. My love today is eight years old and I wanted that his first feeling today was the unconditional warmth and love of a mother.
Happy Birthday, my Treasure.

 

[Very good.  Subtle differences in word order]

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Jura, thank you. I'll give him a kiss from all of you :)
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Say happy birthday from all of us here too!
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@Elisa: Hehe I forgot to gave you a + point. I just wanted to say by mentioning your husband that your whole family can be happy to have you might it be wife or mother. By reading your nice notebook entry it can make even depressive being alone by myself at the same time. :D

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