Benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans.

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When people try to make it them, most people will make plans to do well. What do you think of planning free-time activities? Some people think that they don't need to make plans because even making plans makes people's lives stressful. Also, there is are free-time activities for enjoying their lives. While they take a rest, if they want to listen to the music, they are able to listen to the music that they love. When they look at the blue sky, if they want to run fast, they can run fast around their apartment or house. Others thinks that if people have a plan to do what they want , without wasting their valuable time, they are able to be satisfied with their free-[delete this space]time activities. In my opinion, if people have plans, they are more pleased with their lives. There are reasons why I think so.
First, if people make a plan to do something, they are able to have an opportunity to do more. For example,[add a space here]suppose that people have a plan to go to an amusement park with their family. Firstly, they should surf the internet to get information such as amusement locations, the site for booking tickets, and the location of a delicious food restaurant. (They should first surf the internet to book tickets and get information such as the amusement park location and the location of a delicious food restaurant.) If they book tickets in advance, they don't need to wait for their turns. Furthermore, they are able to save time. After playing with their families, it couldn't be better to have a delicious food. (After playing with their families, nothing could be better than to have delicious food.)
Second, the reason why people try to plan free-time activities is to refreshing their minds and live more healthily. After enjoying their free-time activities, it helps people concentrate on studying or working[delete this space]. (Enjoying free-time activities helps people to concentrate on studying or working afterward.)
Therefore, planning free-time activities helps people to be pleased.

Benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. (Benefits of planning free-time activities versus the benefits of not making plans.)

When people try to make it, most people will make plans to do well. What do you think of planning free-time activities? Some people think that they don't need to make plans because even making plans makes peoples lives stressful. (Some people think that they don't need to make plans because even making plans makes a peoples lives stressful.)  Also, there is free-time activities for enjoying their life. While they take a rest, if they want to listen to the music, they are able to listen to the music that they love. When they look at the blue sky, if they want to run fast, they can run fast around their apartment or house. Others thinks that if people have a plan to do what they want , without wasting their valuable time, they are able to be satisfied with their free- time activities. In my opinion, If people have plans, they are more pleased with their life. There are reasons why I think so.
First, if people make a plan to do something, they are able to have an opportunity to do more. For example,suppose that people have a plan to go to an amusement park with their family. firstly, they should surf the internet to get information such as amusement locations, booking tickets, and the location of a delicious food restaurant. If they book tickets in advance, they don't need to wait for their turns. Furthermore, they are able to save time. After playing with family, It couldn't be better to have a delicious food. (After playing with the family, it couldn't be better to have delicious food.)
Second, the reason why people try to free-time activities is refreshing their mind and live more healthier. (Secondly, a reason why people try to have free-time activities is to refreash their mind and to live more healthier.)  After enjoying their free-time activities, it helps people concentrate on studying or working . (After enjoying their free-time activities, it helps people to concentrate on studying or working.)
Therefore, planning -free time activities help people be pleased.  (Therefore, planning free time activities help people to be pleased.)

Nice job!  I think you are right to plan trips because it helps to orgnaize your time, and preparedness.