Valentine's Day

I do not like Valentine's Day much. Because people always get ripped off on this day. Chocolates and roses are double, even triple the usual price. I think if hubby buys me a rose on any other day of the year, I would be more happy and more surprised, as he always buys me a rose on Valentine's Day.

I'm not a big fan of Valentine's Day, because people get ripped when buying Valentine's gifts. The price of chocolates and roses can rise to double, even triple what it usually is. If my hubby were to buy me a rose on any other day then I would probably prefer it, since on Valentine's Day it is more expected and less of a surprise.

This is what he does. He tells me one day before the Valentine's Day: "I will give you a surprise, honey." The next day he shows up with his hand behind his back: "Surprise! Guess what I bought you?" I say: " I don't know sweetie, surprise me!" Then a rose rises up. What a good surprise!

This is what he typically does: one day before Valentine's Day, he says "I'm going to give you a surprise tomorrow, honey." The next day, he comes home with a hand behid his back and says, "Here's your surprise - guess what I bought for you." I say, "I don't know sweetie, surprise me!" Then out comes a rose - what a pleasant surprise!

Another good surprise on Valentine's Day is we go to a Thai restaurant. "I will take you somewhere really nice, darling. You will like it", says he as usual. Then the car stops at a Thai restaurant. I tell him: "Wow, it IS a nice restaurant. I remember we came here last Valentine's Day!"

Another nice thing we do on Valentine's Day is we go to a Thai restaurant. He says in his usual manner, "I will take you somewhere really nice, darling, you will like it." Then he stops the car at the Thai restaurant. I tell him, "Wow, it really IS a nice restaurant - I somehow remember coming here last Valentine's day too!"

I think we should treat every day like a Valentine's Day and vise versa!

I think we should treat every day like Valentine's Day, and perhaps treat Valentine's Day as an "ordinary day"!

Valentine's Day

I do not like Valentine's Day that much. Because people always gets ripped off on this day. Chocolates and roses are double, even triple, the usual price. I think if my hubby buys me a rose on any other day of the year, I would be more happy happier and more surprised, as because he always buys me a rose on Valentine's Day.

This is what he does. He tells me one day before the Valentine's Day:, "I will give you a surprise, honey." The next day he shows up with his hand behind his back:, "Surprise! Guess what I bought you?" I say:, " I don't know sweetie, surprise me!" Then a rose rises up Then he takes out the rose behind his back. What a good surprise!

Another good surprise on Valentine's Day is we when we go to a Thai restaurant. He usually says, "I will take you somewhere really nice, darling. You will like it", says he as usual . Then the car stops at a Thai restaurant. I tell him: "Wow, it IS a nice restaurant. I remember we came here last Valentine's Day!"

I think we should treat every day like a Valentine's Day and vise versa!

You either sound very sarcastic or you like Valentine's Day when it is not the actual day. Your writing is pretty good. However, there are many ambiguous grammar issues. Other than that, keep up the good work! Just work on word placement and grammar. :)