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Catie King
About pets About the pets, I love dogs and cats, I feel they are very lovely. Fishes and birds is ok, but because I can't hold them in my alms,I feel they are not so close. But the insects and amphibious are not ok for me,a little terrible. people said that if you want to love,you should have a cat. And if you want to be loved, you should have a dog. Of course I want to be loved,so I love dogs very much,I think they are the most lovely animal.They are faithful friends of human,they make me feel warm and safe. Cats are very cute,looks pretty and proud.I rather to be a girl like a cat than to have one.
16 avr. 2013 12:50
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About Pets

Today I want to write about pets. My favorite pets are cats and dogs as I feel they are very cute and lovely. I also like birds and fish but because I can't hold them in my arms I can't bond with them in the same way. I definitely do not like insects or little sea creatures!

Cats are very mysterious and they like to be shown love but dogs really show you love in a deeper way so I feel they are mans best friend.

Of course I want to be loved so I prefer dogs over cats as they are very loyal and faithful to the human being and they have a way of making you feel warm and safe.

Cats are cute and pretty so I'd definitely prefer to be a cat than to own one!

6 mai 2013

About pets

About the pets, I love dogs and cats, I feel they are very lovely. Fishes and birds are ok. But because I can't hold them in my arms, I feel them are not so close. But the insects and amphibious are not ok to me,even a little terrible.
People say that if I want to love,I should have a cat. And if I want to be loved,I should have a dog.
You know I want to be loved,so I love dogs very much,I think they are the most lovely animals.They are faithful to their friends of human,they make me feel warm and safe.
Cats are very cute,they looks pretty and proud.I'd like rather to be a girl like a cat than to have one.

13 mai 2013

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About pets

About the pets, I love dogs and cats, I feel they are very lovely. Fishes and birds is ok, but because I can't hold them in my alms,I feel they are not so close. But the insects and amphibious are not ok for me,a little terrible.
people said that if you want to love,you should have a cat. And if you want to be loved, you should have a dog.
Of course I want to be loved,so I love dogs very much,I think they are the most lovely animal.They are faithful friends of human,they make me feel warm and safe.
Cats are very cute,looks pretty and proud.I rather to be a girl like a cat than to have one.

6 mai 2013

About Pets

About the pets, I love dogs and cats, I feel they are very lovely. Fish and birds are OK, but because I can't hold them in my arms, I feel they are not so close. But the insects and amphibians are not OK for me, a little terrible.
People say that if you want to love, you should have a cat. And if you want to be loved, you should have a dog.
Of course I want to be loved, so I love dogs very much. I think they are the most lovely animal. They are faithful friends of humans, they make me feel warm and safe.
Cats are very cute, look pretty and are proud. I rather to be a girl like a cat than to have one.

 

Because the term OK is an acronym it is capitalized. The unabbreviated form is okay. Don't forget spaces after punctuation marks! The singular and plural forms for fish are the same. A frog is amphibious, it is an amphibian.

17 avril 2013

About pets...

About the petsAs far as pets go, I love dogs and cats, I feel think they are very lovely. Fishes and birds is are ok, but because I can't hold them in my alms arms,I feel they are not so close cant bond with them/develop closeness with them. But the insects and amphibious amphibians are not ok for meat all,a little they're terrible.
people said say that if you want to love,you should have a cat. And if you want to be loved, you should have a dog.
Of course I want to be loved,so I love dogs very much,I think they are the most lovely animal/s.They are faithful friends of human/s,they make me feel warm and safe.
Cats are very cute,looks pretty and proud.I rather to be a girl like a cat than to have one.

16 avril 2013
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