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Mmmm! I propose the Food Method of Learning a Language:
1. Learn the words for the ingredients and utinsels,
2. Practice the verbs in all the tenses for preparing it,
3. Meet with friends to cook and eat and talk about food everyday!
:)
I made a pizza
I always enjoy cooking different dishes with different flavors. What I love the most in my life is to try to cook different types of dishes from around the world. I love fast food as well. I suppose, everyone loves fast food. Do you know a person anyone in the world who don't doesn't like hamburgers, hotdogs, or pizza? That's really odd if a person doesn't like such convenient and delicious food. (This sentence and the next sentence express opposing sentiments, one calling fast food "convenient and delicious" the other saying that "it isn't healthy." You need a way to connect the two sentences so it flows better, such as saying "However, it isn't healthy at all.") It isn't healthy at all. Eating too much fast food causes many problems for people, and that it is the main reason for obesity. Eating in moderation is the key to balance our eating pattern, or always be healthy. (Sorry, I don't understand what you want to say. Do you mean... "Eating in moderation is the key to having a balanced diet and staying healthy"?)
What makes me different from others is that I love homemade fast food, and always prefer to make my own pizza, hamburgers, and hotdogs.The other day, I made a tasty pizza. Just looking at the picture makes me hungry. Yum! Yum! I made its dough as well. The dough was really tasty, spongy, and soft. That was the best dough I've ever made in my life!
P.S. Don't forget to have a balance in your diet balanced diet. Our body needs all sorts of vitamins, and minerals.
Sarah, your pizza looks so delicious! It looks even better than any restaurant's. :)
I made a pizza
I always enjoy cooking different dishes with different flavors. What I love the most in my life is to try or cook different types of dishes from around the world. I love fast food as well. I suppose, everyone loves fast food. Do you know a any person in the world who don't doesn't like hamburgers, hotdogs, or pizza? That's really odd if a person doesn't like such convenient and delicious food. It isn't healthy at all. Eating too much fast food causes many problems for people, and that is the main reason for obesity. Eating in moderation is the key to balance our eating pattern, or always be healthy.
What makes me different from others is that I love homemade fast food, and always prefer to make my own pizzas, hamburgers, and hotdogs.(space)The other day, I made a tasty pizza. Just looking at the picture makes me hungry. Yum! Yum! I made its dough as well. The dough was really tasty, spongy, and soft. That was the best dough I've ever made in my life!
P.S. Don't forget to have a balance in your diet a balanced diet. Our body needs all sorts of vitamins, and minerals.
your pizza looks SO GOOD - i'm so jealous!
I made a pizza
I always enjoy cooking different dishes with different flavors(flavours for Brit English). What I love the most in my life is to try or to cook different types of dishes from around the world. I love fast food as well. I suppose, everyone loves fast food. Do you know a person in the world anyone who doesn't like hamburgers, hotdogs, or pizza? That's It's really odd unusual if a person/someone doesn't like such convenient and delicious food. However, it isn't really very healthy at all and eating too much fast food can causes many/lots of problems for people. and that It is (said to be) the main reason for/cause of obesity. Eating in moderation is the key to maintain balance in our eating habits pattern, or always be and to ensure that we remain healthy.
What makes me different from others is that I love homemade fast food, and always for example I prefer to make my own pizza, hamburgers, and hotdogs. The other day, I made a tasty pizza. Just looking at the picture makes me hungry. Yum! Yum! I made its dough/the base as well. The dough was really tasty, spongy, and soft. That was the best dough I've ever made in my life!
P.S. Don't forget to have a balanced in your diet. Our body needs all sorts of vitamins, and minerals.
Well done Sarah, the pizza looks very appetising and much better than any fast food store pizza!!
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