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Luis Brandao
Mother's day! I'd just like to say : Mom I love you so much, you are everything to me and I want to be everything to you! I've the best mom around the world ;D Happy Mother's Day everybody :DD
12 mai 2013 16:19
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Mother's day!

I'd just like to say : Mom I love you so much, you are everything to me and I want to be everything to you!
I've the best mom around the world ;D Happy Mother's Day everybody :DD

 

You're English is very good! one small tip. It is strange to use the contraction for "I have" like you do. I've the best mom in the world. It would sound better to say "I've got the best mom" or just write out " I have the best mom in the world."

 

Very nice entry.

21 mai 2013
Not at all Жарас. I try to be a good son :)
22 mai 2013
There is nothing to add! thanks for congratulations! you are the good son of the mother)
12 mai 2013
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