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Fishing I often go fishing. I went fishing this morning, I just got home. I hooked about thirty fishes, but they were too small, so I let them gone. I always hooked small fishes recently, even no one. I was a little sad.
22 mai 2013 13:01
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Many days, I often go fishing. 
I just got home from fishing this morning. 

I hooked caught about thirty fishes. but They were too small to keep, so I let them gone.
Recently, I always hooked it seems that I am only catching small fish.es recently, even no one.
I was a This makes me feel a little sad.

 

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<em>This is a great notebook entry. The word "fish" and its plural form can be a little tricky. The plural of fish is usually still fish, unless you are speaking about multiple species of fish. (In biology, for instance, fishes is used to refer to multiple species of fish.) But in your notebook entry, "I caught about thirty fish." (or) "I caught over thirty fish." is what I would suggest. </em><em>I hope this helps.</em>

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<em>Suggested edits:</em>

Many days, I often go fishing. I just got home from fishing this morning.

I caught about thirty fish. They were too small to keep, so I let them go. Recently, it seems that I am only catching small fish.

This makes me feel a little sad.

23 mai 2013
That's very nice of you, thank you Ann.
23 mai 2013
I think it's better using the word "caught" than "hooked". Just a suggestion.
23 mai 2013

There's no wrong? Somebody help me please, thank you.

23 mai 2013
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