Let's start All misfortune what we have, comes from desire happiness myself. And all happiness what we have, comes from aspiration happiness for others.

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Aleksey

18 juin 2013 20:36

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Let's start

All the misfortune that we have, comes from the desire for happiness for ourselves; and all the happiness that we have, comes from the aspiration towards happiness for others.

Just another option. Newgirl's correction is also perfectly correct.

18 juin 2013

Let's start,

all misfortune that we have comes from desiring happiness for ourselves,
and all happiness that we have comes from aspiring that others will be happy.

18 juin 2013

But what you believe in is very valuable.

27 juin 2013

Oh.... My level is very low (

19 juin 2013

All misfortune that we have, comes from desiring happiness for ourselves
and all happiness that we have, comes from aspiring that others will be happy.

19 juin 2013

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