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Happy Time with My Little Nephew My dear nephew, you are my happy nuts, thank for you bring some funny here, i like you. Although,sometimes you grieve me to hear how disobedient you've been, but most of the time, you make me very happy, let me forgot something unhappy and worry.I like you, i hope you can grow up healthly and happiness. Child's simplicity is the most beautiful.
19 juin 2013 17:09
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Happy Fun Times with My Little Nephew

 

My dear nephew, you are my little pistachio [開心果 = pistachio.  Even with this correction, most native English speakers will not understand what you are trying to say at this point.  "Little nut" is better using the slang meaning of nut.  The best correction would be "... little nutty joy"]happy nuts. Thank for you for bringing some funny here, into my life.  I like love you.

Although,Sometimes you grieve me to hear how disobedient you've been. but most of the time, Still you make me very happy most of the time, letting me forget something unhappiness and worries. I like love you, i hope that you can will grow up healthly healthy and happiness be with you.

A child's simplicity, a  is the most beautiful simplicity.

19 juin 2013

Happy Fun Times with My Little Nephew

 

My dear nephew, you are my little pistachio [開心果 = pistachio.  Even with this correction, most native English speakers will not understand what you are trying to say at this point.  "Little nut" is better using the slang meaning of nut.  The best correction would be "... little nutty joy"]happy nuts. Thank for you for bringing some funny here, into my life.  I like love you.

Although,Sometimes you grieve me to hear how disobedient you've been. but most of the time, Still you make me very happy most of the time, letting me forget something unhappiness and worries. I like love you, i hope that you can will grow up healthly healthy and happiness be with you.

A child's simplicity, a  is the most beautiful simplicity.

19 juin 2013

Happy Time with My Little Nephew

My dear nephew, you are my happy little nutso, thank for you bringing humor here, I like you.

Even though sometimes it bothers me to hear how disobedient you've been,  most of the time you make me very happy,and help me forget unhappiness and worry.I like you, I hope you can grow up to be healthly and full of happiness.

A child's simplicity is the most beautiful thing.

19 juin 2013

 Happy Times with My Little Nephew

My dear nephew, you are my happy nuts sunshine, thank for you for bringing some funny here making me laugh, I like love you. 

Although Sometimes you grieve it upsets me to hear how disobedient you've been, but most of the time, you make me very happy, letting me forget about my worries something unhappy and worry. I like love you, I hope you can grow up healthy and happy. 

Children's innocence simplicity is the most beautiful thing.

 

 Good job! If you have questions, I'll try to answer them~

19 juin 2013
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