你今天做什么？（你今天做什么？means what are you going to do ?/你今天做了什么？means what did you do today?） (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)
我今天工作很忙了。（please don't add "了"here，if you want add "了",you must say "我今天的工作可忙了。"） (I was very busy today at work!)
我一点伤心因为没有酒!我有一点伤心，因为这里没有酒！哈哈。
你呢？你今天做了什么？忙不忙？ (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)
I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!
谢谢！
Sean
你今天做了(加了表示問你憶經做了的, 不加就是你想做什麼,是不同的 add the word"了" means you have done something in this day. if not means you want to do something)什么？ (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)
我今天工作很忙了(remove the word,肯定句格式,不要加任何感嘆詞) (I was very busy today at work!)
我有一点伤心, 因为這兒(you should tell where is not the wine)沒有酒! 哈哈。
你呢？你今天做了什么？忙不忙？ (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)
I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!
谢谢！
Sean
generally, it is very good.
你今天做了什么？/你今天做什么了？（What did you do today?）
我今天工作很忙。
我一点伤心因为没有酒! 哈哈。
你呢？你今天做了什么？/你今天做什么了？忙不忙？ (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)
I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!
只 zhǐ（third tone）
晚饭 wǎn fàn 吃
你今天做什么？ (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)
我今天工作很忙。 (I was very busy today at work!)
我有一点伤心因为没有酒! 哈哈。
你呢？你今天做什么？忙不忙？ (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)
I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!
谢谢！
Sean
你今天做了(past perfect indication)什么？
more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!
我今天工作很忙了(past perfect here, mind the difference)。
I was very busy today at work!
我有一点伤心(有一点/有点儿 can be used as a phrase in a sentense, meaning "there's a little bit")，因为今天(today)没有酒喝(to drink, sry don't know why but lack of indication of time and function just sounds a bit weird here xP)! 哈哈。
你呢？你今天做了什么？忙不忙？
How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?
Photo Comments:
mistake with 吃 (eat), minor structure problem with 以 (所以 so)
Gotta say very cute handwriting sooo adorable! :) Well done well done!
Hope it helps!
