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swimming lesson One week ago ,a friend introduced a swimming coach to me,he is a professional swimming coach ,he was in China national team years ago . The pool is just front of the building which i am living ,it belongs to our community ,its free for us who are living in our community . I did know nothing about swimming one week ago ,and my coach told me he will teach me not just i could swim but i could swim very well ,thats why i chose him to be my coach . At the beginning ,he just taught me how to float on the water ,at first i didn't dare to put my head into the water,because once my nose touch the water ,i just wanted to breath ,then everybody knows the result is inhale some water through my nose ,it was a such terrible felling ,and then learnt how to knock my legs ,at first i could use my legs to knock the water very well and i could moved very fast ,but then the problem is coming, i couldn't keep myself swim straightly. he is very strict and professional coach ,he told me how to relax my body how to knock my legs how to control my feet . Now,i could move for 14 meters through knocking my legs in one breath and very straightly . I still need to practice using my legs to knock water, because my coach thinks the basic skills are very important . I am very happy because i could "move" in the water .
15 juil. 2013 14:31
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swimming lesson

One week ago, a friend introduced a swimming coach to me, he is a professional swimming coach ,he who was in China national team years ago .
The There is a swimming pool is just in front of the building in which i am living. It belongs to our community and is ,its free for us those who are living in our this community .
I did know knew nothing about swimming one week ago, so and my coach told me he will teach me not just i could to swim but i could to swim very well, and that's why i chose him to be my coach .
At the beginning, he just taught me how to float on the water. At first i didn't dare to put my head into under the water, because once as soon as my nose touched the water, i just wanted to breathe<em>,(breath (noun) and breathe (verb) are both pronounced and spelt differently), </em>then everybody knows the result is that I inhale some water through my nose, it was a such terrible an awful feeling. , and Then I learnt how to knock kick my legs and at first i could use my legs to knock kick the water very well and i could move very fast, but then a new the problem arose is coming, that i couldn't keep myself swim in a straightly line. The coach is very strict and professional coach, he told me how to relax my body, how to kick my legs and how to control my feet .
Now,i could can swim move for 14 meters just through kicking my legs, in just one breath, and in a straight line very straightly .
I still need to practice using my legs to kick water, because my coach thinks the basic skills are very important .
I am very happy because i could can "move" in the water .

 

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15 juillet 2013
Marcus ,thank you .
16 juillet 2013
kick water, not 'knock water'
15 juillet 2013
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