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Happiness Passbook A mother gave a passbook to her daughter at the happy girl's wedding and told her, the passbook is for you but there is not any money in it. Please remember, save some money in it and record and happiness when you have some happiness. The daughter nodded. Time passed, the daughter and her husband came to have more and more contradictions. They always argued and at last they decided to divorce. At that time the girl remembered that her mother also told her to withdrawals before they divorce. There were so many people in the bank that she had to wait in line for a long time. It was boring and she opened the passbook. January 1st 2002, saved 300 yuan, got married with the person who I love. September 7th 2002, saved 500 yuan, the first birthday with my husband and received the first red rose. January 14th 2003, saved 1000 yuan, my lovely daughter was born. ...... She couldn't help tearing at the bank and returned home at once. Her husband read the passbook and teared, too. They hugged tightly.

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Happiness Passbook

A mother gave a passbook to her daughter at the happy girl's wedding and told her, the passbook is for you but there is not any no money in it. Please remember, save some money in it and record and about the happiness when you have some happiness. (Whenever you have some happiness, note a record and save some money there.) The daughter nodded.
Time As the time has passed, the daughter and her husband came to have more and more contradictions. They always argued and at last they decided to divorce. At that time the girl remembered that her mother also told her to make/do withdrawals (withdraw money from the passbook) before they divorce.
There were so many people in the bank that she had to wait in line for a long time. It was boring and she opened the passbook.

January 1st 2002, saved 300 yuan, got married with the person who I love.
September 7th 2002, saved 500 yuan, the first birthday with my husband and received the first red rose.
January 14th 2003, saved 1000 yuan, my lovely daughter was born.
......
She couldn't help tearing at the bank and returned home at once.
Her husband read the passbook and teared, too. They hugged tightly.

 

 

Thank you for this heartwarming story. It's very nice. Have a nice day!

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Happiness Passbook

A mother gave a passbook to her daughter at the happy girl's wedding and told her, the passbook is for you but there is not any money in it. Please remember, save some money in it and record and any happiness whenever you have come upon a little some happiness. The daughter nodded.
Time passed, the daughter and her husband came to have more and more disagreements contradictions. They always argued and at last they decided to divorce. At that time the girl remembered that her mother also told her to withdrawals the balance before they any divorce.
There were so many people in the bank that she had to wait in line for a long time. It was boring and she opened the passbook.

January 1st 2002, saved 300 yuan, got married with the person who I love.
September 7th 2002, saved 500 yuan, the first birthday with my husband and received the first red rose.
January 14th 2003, saved 1000 yuan, my lovely daughter was born.
......
She couldn't help tearing weeping in at the bank and returned home at once.
Her husband read the passbook and teared, wept too. They hugged tightly.

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Happiness Passbook

A mother gave a passbook to her daughter at the happy girl's wedding and told her, the passbook is for you but there is not any money in it. Please remember, save some money in it and record and the happiness when you have some happiness. The daughter nodded.
Time passed, the daughter and her husband came to have more and more contradictions. They always argued were always arguing1* and at last2* finally they decided to divorce. At that time the girl remembered that her mother also told her to withdrawals the money before they divorced.
There were so many people in the bank that she had to wait in line for a long time. It was boring and she opened the passbook.

January 1st 2002, saved 300 yuan, got married with the person who I love.
September 7th 2002, saved 500 yuan, the first birthday with my husband and received the first red rose.
January 14th 2003, saved 1000 yuan, my lovely daughter was born.
......
She couldn't help tearing crying at the bank and returned home at once.
Her husband read the passbook and teared cried, too. They hugged tightly.

 

1* you can use past continuous to indicate a complaint or repeated problem.

2* use at last for something that takes a lot of effort to achieve. eg He took the exam 10 times and was happy when he passed at last.

 

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nah! it's typical hyper-sentimental stuff! Any country, any culture can generate such fairystories. haha! (joking)
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Hi. I'm a professional English teacher from the US. I'm on vacation and I just joined italki, so I have some time to chat with my counterparts from around the world. This story is very interesting, actually I think I learned a lesson I can apply now. Would you say it is typical of Chinese culture? (Btw, you could say "tearing up," note that, with this meaning, "tear" rhymes with "beer." If "tear" is pronounced to rhyme with "bear," that means to "rip."

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