My introduction's essay : How to become a doctor Please help me to correct my introduction, hook, background information and thesis statement. Being a doctor is not easy. Most people want to be a

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My introduction's essay : How to become a doctor Please help me to correct my introduction, hook, background information and thesis statement. Being a doctor is not easy. Most people want to be a doctor, but the competitive examination for being a Medical student in Thailand has high competition rate. One-third of students who want to be a doctor can passing an exam and they can be a Medical student. Accordingly, students should prepare themselves while they study in Grade 10. Moreover, passing an exam is just the first step to become a doctor. Medical students have to study for six years. We can divide to be four levels, Freshmen, Pre-clinic, Clinic, and Extern and each levels and each levels has to study many subjects.

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My introduction's essay : How to become a doctor

Please help me to correct my introduction, hook, background information and thesis statement.

Being a doctor is not easy. Most people want to be a doctor, but the competitive entrance examination for being a for Medical students in Thailand has high competition rate is highly competitive. Only one-third of prospective students who want to be a doctor can passing pass an the exam and they can be to become a Medical student. Accordingly, students should start prepare themselves preparing while they study are in Grade 10. Moreover, passing an exam is just the first step to become becoming a doctor. Medical students have to study for six years. We can divide to be which are divided into four levels: Freshmen, Pre-clinic, Clinic, and Extern. Each of these levels requires the student to study many subjects. and each levels and each levels has to study many subjects.