Third Essay:Establishing a Restaurant in My Neighborhood Thank you review this long essay, would you please give some advice on both language usage and struture. Various services, such as barber shop and grocery store, have been provided in my neighborhood over the past few years. For the ones who expect more convenient life and more economical benefits, it would be good news that a new restaurant would be built in my community. Admittedly, constructing a restaurant also enjoys several disadvantages; however, as I consider the specific situations of my community, I firmly believe the strong points outweigh the weak points. Setting up a restaurant may bring about some minor drawbacks, like pollution and noise problem. The restaurant may discharge waste water, and make the community smelly. Also, if the restaurant opened late and provided drinking service, the drunken customers who left at midnight would yell and cry, and then the noise problem arose. Nevertheless, as for as I am concerned, the disadvantages mentioned above are slight when compared to its advantages. The restaurant can bring conveniences, especially in my community where people live there are single. Just like me, I am tired after getting off the work, and don't want to cook, so I can stride to the restaurant for dinner. Furthermore, a new restaurant will give me an additional choice. If I don't like to have dinner in KFC, I can choose to go there. Moreover, the restaurant may bring other economical benefits. This is very important for my community because most people who live there are impoverished, and some of them are unemployed. The restaurant may help them by recruiting employees there. In addition, the restaurant may need other retailers to supply materials for it, which will provide more job opportunity for the residents who are willing to work as a retailer. Also, the restaurant needs to be taxed, and the money gained from the tax can help my community to improve its living condition. Although building of a restaurant in my neighborhood have minor disadvantages, more advantages can be sought. The convenience and benefits gained from the restaurant seem more important for me. Besides, the disadvantage caused by the restaurant can be diminished by several measures. For example, the restaurant can be asked to prevent pollution and be restricted to operate only before midnight. Therefore, in such circumstance, I prefer to agree with building of a new restaurant.