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CORRECT MISTAKES I have a lot of hobbies, but I don’t have as much time as I would like to. However, when I have spare time, i like trekking and running because there are good sports which are connected with the environment. Also, I love listening music when I arrive at home because the music relax me. When I was a child, I use to play the guitar because I love music, but now I haven`t got time to play it.
4 mars 2014 18:38
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CORRECT MISTAKES

I have a lot of hobbies, but I don’t have as much time as I would like to. However, when I have spare time, I like to go trekking and running because these are good sports which are connected with the environment. Also, I love listening to music when I get home because the music relaxes me. When I was a child, I used to play the guitar because I love music, but now I haven't got time to play it.

4 mars 2014

CORRECT MISTAKES

I have a lot of hobbies, but I don’t have as much time as I would like to. However, when I have spare time, I like going (Or, "to go")trekking and running, because they are good sports that are connected to the environment. Also, I love listening to music when I get home because it relaxes me. When I was a child, I used to play the guitar because I love music, but now I don't have time to play it.

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Anya's correction is great! I just wanted to show you other ways you could write this entry.

4 mars 2014
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