review comments

I received a manuscript which is about online support groups for mental health. This paper is unfamiliar to me. Firstly, I should read it at least three times; secondly, it is useful that the unknown words request my use of the dictionary; and lastly, I should present my ideas on this paper and also provide conclusions.

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I received a manuscript which is unfamiliar to me about online support groups for mental health. Firstly, I need to read it at least three times; secondly, it will be useful because it requires me to search for unknown words in the dictionary; and finally, I will need to present my ideas on this paper along with conclusions.