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Rainie Fang
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Requirements:
1.You are organising a meeting to discuss possible cuts to your department's budget.
2.Write an email to all staff in your department:
a.giving them the date of the meeting
b.explaining why some cuts have to be made
c.saying why it is important for all staff to attend
3.Write 40-50 words.
Dear colleagues,
The meeting to discuss possible cuts to our department's budget will be set in next Wednesday afternoon 2 p.m. and we need attendence of everyone.
Since we have several projects currently, the budget should be cut to ensure every plan can undergo properly and no will be delayed or concealled.
It is of importance to have all attendance to discuss the possibility and the rangs of the cuts.
Thank you!
Fang T
Thank you for correcting my notebook !
28 avr. 2014 15:05
Corrections · 1
The meeting to discuss possible cuts to our department's budget will be on Wednesday afternoon at 2 pm and we need everyone to attend. (more straightforward but you could also say 'need the attendance of everyone' or even simpler: “at 2 pm. Everyone must attend. “
Since we have several current projects, the budget needs to be cut to ensure every plan can proceed properly without any delay. ( 'or cancellation' is not really required here as 'every plan can proceed' already means no cancellations)
It is important to have all attending to discuss the possibility and the range of the cuts.
3 mai 2014
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Rainie Fang
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Chinois (autre), Anglais, Japonais
Langue étudiée
Anglais, Japonais
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