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Not sure if.. Hi! It's been such a long time since I wrote my last notebook entry. I'm not sure if my entry didn't have anything to be corrected or nobody had noticed my entry! I always expect corrections for my entries! Well, What to talk about? Maybe cellphones? ?Yeah, cellphones! I'm about to buy a new cellphone and I'm at the edge of madness because of it. Yeah, I'm not about to correct myself, I'm at the edge of madness! I'm almost a perfectionist! Because all the time, I want the best thing possible with a limited budget. It's not good nor bad. It's annoying. Because I want to have all the thing I expect the device to have with the lowest price possible, complete craziness! I have chosen the cellphone I want, but it has two versions. One is the main and the second is the Mini version. The mini version costs almost half of the main version, and carries the main characteristics as the main one, but it has two flaws which makes me doubt to buy it. It has lower screen resolution, and the RAM and CPU are half powerful than the main one. It's not bad, but it's not the thing I really want. I'm going crazy if to wait a little more for new versions or risk the money and buy one of them! I'm pretty sure if I buy the mini one, my eyes will still be after the main version and I'll be disappointed in the one I have from time to time. It's so bad! I want the main version! I want money! Money money money! As P.O of Block B says in the song 'Jackpot', "get that money money get that right!" I WANT MONEY :| I won't have a job and any income till I graduate from university which will be around one year and a half later! It's so late.. I NEED A JOB!! :| Thanks for reading and revising! :)

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Not sure if..

Hi!

It's been such a long time since I wrote my last notebook entry. I'm not sure if my entry didn't have anything to be corrected or nobody had noticed it! I always expect corrections for my entries!
Well, What to talk about? Maybe cellphones? Yeah, cellphones!
I'm about to buy a new cellphone and I'm at the edge of madness because of it. Yeah, I'm not about to correct myself, I'm at the edge of madness! (or I am about to loos it or I am about to loos my mind)

I'm kind of a perfectionist! Because I always want the best things possible with a limited budget. It's not good nor it is bad. It's annoying. Because I want to have everything I expect from the device to have with the lowest price possible, complete craziness!

I have chosen the cellphone I want, but it has two versions. One is the main and the second is the mini version. The mini version costs almost half of the main version, and carries the main characteristics as the main one, but it has two flaws which makes me doubt to buy it. It has lower screen resolution, and the RAM and CPU are half power of the main one. It's not bad, but it's not what I really want. I'm going crazy if to wait a little more for new versions or risk the money and buy one of them! I'm pretty sure if I buy the mini one, my eyes will still be after the main version and I'll be disappointed in the one I have from time to time. It's so bad! (Insane!) I want the main version! I want (need?)money! Money money money!

As P.O of Block B says in the song 'Jackpot', "get that money money get that right!" I WANT MONEY :| I won't have a job and any income till I graduate from university which will be around one year and a half later! It's so late.. I NEED A JOB!! :|

Thanks for reading and revising! :)

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