IETS 6 TEST 1 WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.


The graph and table shows information about global water use and water consumption in Brazil and The Congo.


The account ammount of water use by for agriculture was the highest, rising from around 500 Km3 in 1900 to over 3000 Km3 in 2000 and saw a constant increase throughout this period. There was a similar figuer figure for industrial and domestic water use in 1900 (under 100 Km3) and it held on remained at this level until 1950, before the account ammount of industrial use rose to over 1000 Km3 in 2000, which doubled doubling the account ammount of domestic water use in that year (around 500 Km3).

The table shows that the figure for water consumption of each person in Brazil was fifty-fold as much as that in The Congo( 359 m2 and 8 m2 respectively ), although The Congo had far lower account of less population(5.2 million) and irrigated land(100 Km2) while Brazil had a 176 million population and 26,500 Km2 irrigated land in 2000.

Overall, water was mainly used by agriculture in the last centry(1900-2000)., while The figure for domestic use was the lowest, although it saw an upward trend in this period and the account ammount of water consumption of Brazilian was much higher than that of the residents of Congo in 2000.

This is excellent English writing! Your use of vocabulary and sentence structure is also really great! Some of the corrections I made were not necessarily incorrect, but changed to make your writing flow a little better. 

A note: the word "account" is usually used as a record of something such as "an account of the meetings". It can also be used as a verb: to give an explanation for something, "she accounted for the missing papers". In contrast, the word "ammount" reffers to how much or how many.

Does this help? I may have misunderstood your use of the word, I appologize if so.

Overall, this is really great writing, good job!