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Anniversary I am in a trip for a anniversary with my brothers. People on the train have different mind and destinations. And I miss someone in heaven. Would you know my name? If I saw you in heaven
25 juil. 2014 15:56
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Anniversary

I am on a trip for an anniversary with my brothers.
People on the train have different minds and destinations.
And I miss someone in heaven.
Would you know my name
If I saw you in heaven?

25 juillet 2014
Just a few little mistakes I saw :)
25 juillet 2014
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