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A sample Topic: Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it? My essay: People argue whether children of different abilities should be taught together.Some may think the answer is yes,while others hold the view that teachers should teach wiser children separately and they deserve particular treatment.I agree with the latter opinion. There may be three reasons why some people think it's better to teach students of different levels together.First of all,every student has both strengths and weaknesses.Though some may not as clever as others,they can have some pros in certain aspects,such as creativity,sensation and so forth.Therefore,it's a wonderful way for students to learn from each other by studying together.Secondly,students need a fair atmosphere.If students are divided into different groups according to their intelligence quality,less wiser children must feel uncomfortable .This may arose mental health problems on those less wiser ones,which dose great harm to their growth.Last but not least,teaching separately makes the unfairness problem like racial discrimination severer,and this can have an adverse influence on the development of society. People hold the opposite view may have the following reasons.One reason is that it's more efficient to teach different level's of students separately.Wiser children absorb knowledge much more faster than less intelligent ones,thus teaching students with the same level can save much adjusting time.The other reason is that they think cleverer students deserve more attention,in that they are more likely to be successful and contribute more to our society.From this perspective,they need to be taught with special treatments. Though some people may disagree with me,it appears to me that smarter students should be taught separately.In my experience,less intelligent students may be distracted by those smarter ones.Even though they study together,they actually comprehend the knowledge at different speed.This makes some children under great pressure,and they'd rather study at their own pace.On the other hand,those who are more intelligent may complain that some students make the teaching pace slow down,and it is a waste of their time.

10 août 2014 14:15

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Hi Grace,

You've done very well, but it makes your text much easier to read if you include a space after commas and periods. In an exam you would be penalised if you don't. For example, "cat, dog, mouse" or "Run faster. Don't stop!"

In addition, this is a very emotive discussion that leads to very angry discussions. I would recommend researching "politically correct" language to keep your articles more neutral.

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Topic:
Some people argue that teaching children of with different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do what you think about it?

My essay:
People argue whether children of different abilities should be taught together. Some may think the answer is yes, while others hold the view that teachers should teach wiser more advanced/more intelligent children separately and because they deserve particular treatment. I agree with the latter opinion.

There may be three reasons why some people think it's better to teach students of different levels together. First of all, every student has both strengths and weaknesses. Though some may not be as clever as others, they can may have some pros other advantages in certain aspects areas, such as creativity, sensation [do you mean "tactile sensitivity", or "emotional intelligence"?] and so forth on. Therefore, Studying together is it's a wonderful way for students to learn from each other by studying together.

Secondly, students need a fair atmosphere environment/chance. If students are divided into different groups according to the quality of their intelligence quality, less wiser able children must may feel uncomfortable. This may arose cause/provoke mental health problems on those less wiser ones later, which does greater harm to their growth. Last but not least, teaching them separately makes the any unfairness into a severer problem and can seem like racial discrimination severer, with and this can have an adverse influences on the development of our society.

People who hold the opposite view may have the following reasons; One reason is that it is more efficient to teach different levels of students separately. Wiser Brighter children absorb knowledge much more faster than less intelligent ones others, thus teaching students with the same level can save much a lot of time adjusting time. In addition, The other reason is that they think cleverer students deserve more attention because in that they are more likely to be successful and contribute more to our society. From this perspective, they need should be given to be taught with special treatments.

Though some people may disagree with me, it appears to me that smarter students should be taught separately. In my experience, less intelligent students may be are often distracted by the smarter ones students. Even though they study together, they actually comprehend the knowledge subject at different speeds. This makes puts some children under greater pressure to perform, and when they'd rather study at their own pace. On the other hand, those who are more intelligent may complain that less able some students make slow down the pace of teaching pace slow down, and it is a wastes of their time.