My Ideal Job Today,i will tell you me ideal job.As we know,everyone want to get a descent job.Of course,so i am.My ideal job is to be a teacher who teach foreign student to learn Chinese.I have severa

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My Ideal Job Today,i will tell you me ideal job.As we know,everyone want to get a descent job.Of course,so i am.My ideal job is to be a teacher who teach foreign student to learn Chinese.I have several reasons.First,teacher is a descent job,many people respect teachers.Scend,teacher's salary is not bad.In other words,teacher's welfare is dood.It will make my life have cushion,safety net.By the way,there are many surprises on the Teacher's Day or other special days from students.Inaddition,teacher's working time is short,what's more,teacher get weekend off and have summer and winter vacation.That's very cool.I can use these time to travel where i want to go.Besides,teacher's working condition is comfortable and most colleagues is considerate and easy to get along with.Last but not least,I think to be a Chinese teacher is zero stress.Because me Chinese is not bad and I have enthusiasm for teaching Chinese.

10 sept. 2014 08:18

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My Ideal Job

Today I will tell you my ideal job. As we/you ('we' is not totally wrong, but it is usual to use the second person 'you' and exclude yourself) know, everyone wants (everyone is singular) to get a decent job. Of course,so i am. do I. My ideal job is to be a teacher who teaches foreign students to learn Chinese /teacher of Chinese language to foreign students. I have several reasons: First, teaching is a descent job/career/vocation and many people respect teachers. Second, a teacher's salary is not bad. In other words, teacher's welfare is good. It will make give/provide my life have a cushion, a safety net. By the way, there are many surprises from students on the Teacher's Day or other special days from students. In addition, teachers' working time is short, and what's more, teachers get weekends off and have summer and winter vacations. That's very/really cool. I can use these/such times to travel wherever I want to go. Besides, teachers' working condition is comfortable and most colleagues is are considerate and easy to get along with. Last but not least, I think to be a Chinese language teacher ('Chinese teacher' is ambiguous) is will be zero/without stress for me, because my Chinese is not bad and I have enthusiasm for teaching it Chinese.

Punctuation: After comma, fullstop, semi-colon (most punctuation) - leave a space

descent is a noun (降下，下坡）, decent is an adjective. The stress/pronunciation is different too

You seem to have some trouble with singular and plural in both nouns and verbs.

18 septembre 2014

'Chinese' has two meanings/uses, and it is often necessary to distinguish the two - consider this sentence: "I am a Chinese teacher of Chinese to Chinese students in a Chinese school". In fact the sentence almost works, but you have to consider it a few times to be sure. Use 'Chinese language' to reduce the ambiguity inherent in 'Chinese'

18 septembre 2014

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