Misa
9/22/2014 Suddenly, the sky was pouring with rain. The blurry scenery outside the window was like a picture masked by a thin layer of veil from the heaven. The raindrop was continuously pattering against my window panes and zinc rooftop, hence created a noisy but rhythmic sound. I planned to go out, but now I needed to wait for the rain to stop.
20 sept. 2014 07:03
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9/22/2014

Suddenly, the sky was pouring with rain it was pouring/the heavens opened/a pouring rain started. The blurry scenery outside the window was like a picture masked by with a thin layer of veil descending from the heavens.

The Raindrops was continuously pattered against my window panes and zinc rooftop, hence creating a noisy but rhythmic sound.

I planned to go out, but now I needed to wait for the rain to stop.

20 septembre 2014
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