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Please, check me The purpose of this report is to present the activities in the college canteen about selling unhealthy food in it. A lot of unhealthy foods are selling in the canteen and the students spend a lot of money in those products. The majority of students prefer sell this food before anything else. Those products are chocolate food, hamburgers, hot dog, chips and other unhealthy food. On the other hand, some people prefer to spend their money on other foods or drinks like juice or salads. This group of students is minority because there is less healthy food than unhealthy food. For example, there are three parts that divide it and two parts are about unhealthy food. Other reason for what students don´t eat more healthy food is because they are very expensive. For this reason I think that students need to eat more healthy food, the canteen should have more parts with healthy food and the price should be cheaper. The canteen should change this situation because the students should have a healthy life and at the beginning is about the food.

19 oct. 2014 12:20

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The purpose of this report is to present the activities in the college canteen. It's about selling unhealthy food in it.

A lot of unhealthy foods are selling unheatlhy food is selling in the canteen and the students spend a lot of money in on these products. The majority of students prefer sell buying this food rather than anything else. These products are chocolate food, hamburgers, hot dogs, chips and other unhealthy food.

On the other hand, some people prefer to spend their money on other foods or drinks like juice or salads. This group of students is minority because there is less healthy food than unhealthy food one<em>(just to avoid repetition)</em>.For example, there are three parts that divide it food and two parts are about unhealthy one. Other reason for the fact that students don´t eat more healthy food is because they are it is very expensive.

For this reason, I think that students need to eat more healthy food, the canteen should have more parts with healthy food and the price should be cheaper. The canteen should change this situation because the students should have a healthy life and at the beginning is about the food.

19 octobre 2014

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The purpose of this report is to present the activities in the college canteen about selling unhealthy food in it.

There are unhealthy foods being sold in the college canteen.

A lot of unhealthy foods are being sold in the canteen and the students spend a lot of money on those products. The majority of students prefer buying this food before anything else. Those products are (better: include) chocolate food, hamburgers, hot dog, chips and other unhealthy food (better: as well as several others).

On the other hand, some people prefer to spend their money on other foods or drinks like juice or salads. This group of students is in the minority because there is less healthy food than unhealthy food. For example, there are about 3 items of unhealthy food for every two items of healthy food. Another reason why students don´t eat more healthy food is because it is more expensive.

To encourage students to eat more healthy food, the canteen should have more parts with healthy food and the price should be cheaper. The canteen should change this situation because the students should have a healthy life and in the beginning it is about the food.