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My Roomate I am now living in Beijing, renting a bedroom with a guy. I am a boy but not a gay, so why I live with a man? The guy I live with is quite frowzy. I once thought I am one of the sloppiest man in the world until I met him. He really re-defines what the word frowzy means. He seems to wear the same cloth and trousers for more than one month, and we have been lived the room for more than three month, but the luggage still unpacked. We have been sleep on a bed without sheet for three months (yes we sleep together). Damn, my bottom line on tidiness has been broaden by him. But why he turn out to be that? Well, because he is a poet. He is a artist. He is a philosopher. So life is to him is rather abstract. He can live a happy life without money, fall in love with a girl without being together, composing a song without melody. Things happen to him is quite direct and intuition. He does not care what other people think. He can get high spontaneously. I suppose all the mess in the room is beyond his view. Then why do I live with him? Well, maybe a simple answer is that, he is in a sense quite like me. Maybe I just feel lonely sometimes. But anyway, I should buy a new bed now.
22 déc. 2014 14:34
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My Roomate

I am now living in Beijing, renting a bedroom with a guy. I am a boy male but not a gay, so why am I living with a man?

The guy I live with is quite frowzy. I once thought I am was one of the sloppiest men in the world until I met him. He really re-defines what the word frowzy means. He seems to wear the same clothes and trousers for more than one a month, and we have been lived in the room for more than three months. , but the His luggage is still unpacked. We have been sleeping on a bed without a sheet for three months (yes we sleep together). Damn, my bottom line on tidiness has been broadened by him.

But why has he turned out to be like that? Well, because he is a poet. He is an artist. He is a philosopher. So life is to him is rather abstract. He can live a happy life without money, fall in love with a girl, without being together, composing compose a song without a melody. Things that happen to him is are quite direct and intuitive intuition. He does not care what other people think. He can get high spontaneously. I suppose all the mess in the room is beyond his view.

Then why do I live with him? Well, maybe a simple answer is that, he is, in a sense, quite like me. Maybe I just feel lonely sometimes. But anyway, I should buy a new bed now.

22 décembre 2014

My Roomate

I am now living in Beijing, renting a bedroom with a guy. I am a boy but not a gay, so why I live with a man?  even though you may think so because I live with a man. 

The guy I live with is quite frowzy. I once thought I am one of was the sloppiest man in the world until I met him. He really re-defines what the word frowzy means. He seems to wear the same clothes and trousers for more than one months. We have been lived living together for more than three months, but the  (who's luggage? his? my? our? "our luggage is still...") luggage still unpacked. We have been sleeping on a bed without sheets for three months (yes we sleep together). Damn, my bottom line on tidiness has been broaden by him. he really has broadened my hygienic standards. 

But why he turn out to be that why is he like this? Well, my exmplanaition is because he is a poet. He is an artist. He is a philosopher. So life is to him is rather abstract. He can live a happy life without money, fall in love with a girl without being together, composing a song without a melody. Things happen to him is quite direct and intuition (not sure what you mean by this). He does not care about what other people think. He can get high spontaneously. I suppose all the mess in the room is beyond his view.

I think the reason for why I live with him is because I see a little bit of myself in his (uniqueness/behaviour/character/lifestyle/beliefs ....). Or maybe I just live with him because I'd feel alone otherwise. 

 

But anyway, I should buy a new bed now.


<em>you're doing very well! Your sentences are fairly complex and your vocabulary use is pretty advanced. Make sure you ad an s when you are talking about words in plural. </em>

22 décembre 2014

My Roomate

I am now living in Beijing, renting a bedroom with a guy. I am a boy but not a gay, so why I live with a man?

The guy I live with is quite frowzy. I once thought I am one of the sloppiest man in the world until I met him. He really re-defines what the word frowzy means. He seems to wear the same cloth and trousers for more than one month, and we have been lived the room for more than three months, but the luggage still unpacked. We have been sleep on a bed without sheet for three months (yes we sleep together). Damn, my bottom line on tidiness has been broaden by him.

But why he turn out to be that? Well, because he is a poet. He is an artist. He is a philosopher. So life is to him is rather abstract. He can live a happy life without money, fall in love with a girl without being together, composing a song without melody. Things happen to him is quite direct and intuition. He does not care what other people think. He can get high spontaneously. I suppose all the mess in the room is beyond his view.

Then why do I live with him? Well, a simple answer is that, he is in a sense quite like me. Maybe I just feel lonely sometimes. But anyway, I should buy a new bed now.

22 décembre 2014
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