"Only people who earn lot of money are successful ?"
TOEFL essay - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree with the statement. People who earn lot of money can be successful. but It is not obvious, but people who don't earn a lot of money can be successful too.
I think it is important to define what it means for one is to be successful? And how can we evaluate the success between two different people?
The answer to both questions is not unique. It There are as many answers as people on Earth. In To my opinion mind, people who attain their personal goals are successful. And it is very unlikely that two people will have identical goals. everyone has different goals each goal is totally different between people.
The Success can be expressed in several ways such as helping the poor, becoming famous, co-workers praising you at work, and starting a family.
- help the poor
- be famous
- be praised in his work
- starting a family
Moreover, in one life, your goals evolve every day or at every stage of your life, because you meet some new people and you develop some new aspirations. But, if you don't attain your objectives, are you really truly not successful for all that? …
My second point of this essay is to dis Secondly, where does money fit into success? : What is the place of the money?
Earning a lot of money for some people can be an important goal for some people. But it is not only a goal to attain; money also affords one the luxury of realizing other goals afford to realize other goals. Especially in our society the actual world, money takes has an important place in our daily lives. For example, if your main goal is to travel around the world, inevitably you need money , because money is at on the center of the world system. But no amount of money can earning money can't be always help you for achieve your goals about regarding relationships, love, family or health. even if you earn a lot of money.
From my point of view, I'm feeling I will feel successful when I will found find a passionate job that will permit me to conciliate my personal life with my professional career.
To conclude, earning a lot of money can help us to be successful but being successful doesn't always mean earning a lot of money.
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