a lot of snow
Yesterday almost all day was snowing. On my backyard are the big snowdrifts. I need clean them. I'll be cleaning the snow tonight. I have a big shovel. It has been belonging me three years. When I'll be cleaning the snow my children will be playing nearby me. They like to play on the street in winter.
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a lot of snow
Yesterday it was snowing almost all day. In my backyard, there were big snowdrifts. I need to clear them. I'll be clearing the snow tonight. I have a big shovel. It has been belonging me have had it for three years. When I'll be cleaning the snow, my children will be playing nearby me. They like to play on in the street in winter.
A good text. It sounds cold, but quite exciting to clean the snow. I live in Portugal. It's not very cold, nor is it hot. Our houses are not prepared for the winter...
Have a look at the present perfect, and also prepositions of place (IN the street, IN winter, AT home, etc)..
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