Patsy
Post #1 Hi, everybody! I'm Patsy, I live in Chile, I'm twenty years old and I study Law. I write on this website because I need to improve my English level. Well, I think to tell you about what happened me today. I wake up very sick because I caught a cold and I think this day would be terrible, nevertheless my boyfriend visit me and we eat our favorite food: sushi. It were perfect! Thanks for read me!
27 févr. 2015 00:26
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Post #1

Hi everybody!
I'm Patsy, I live in Chile, I'm twenty years old and I study Law. I write on this website because I need to improve my English level. Well, I think I will tell you about what happened me today. I woke up very sick because I caught a cold and I thought this day would be terrible. Nevertheless, my boyfriend visited me and we ate our favorite food: sushi. It was perfect!
Thanks for reading me!

27 février 2015
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Post #1

Hi, everybody!
I'm Patsy, I live in Chile, I'm twenty years old and I study Law. I'm writing on this website because I need to improve my English level(correct, but usually not said). Well, I think I'll tell you about what happened to me today. I woke up very sick because I caught a cold and I thought this day today would be terrible, nevertheless but my boyfriend visited me and we ate (or "had") our favorite food: sushi. It was perfect!
Thanks for reading my note!

 

Nevertheless is correct, but not commonly used in informal writing or speech. 

Good luck with your studies!



27 février 2015
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