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little change I have never asked myself whether I had changed or not until I entered the university. When I become a student of Sun Yat-Sen University, I realize that I have to take more care about myself. To be honest, this is the first time that I was far away from my parents. During my days in school, I deeply knew that my parent will not always accompany with me; they will not ask me to do this to do that and I must control myself faced with those temptations. I must be independent and careful. Only by doing this can I handle my life in college more effectively. In the end of the first semester of my freshman, I went back to my senior high school and almost all my teachers said that I have really grown up. I think freshman can train me to become more independent.
3 mars 2015 07:46
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Little Change

I have never asked myself whether I had changed or not until since I entered the university. When I became a student of at Sun Yat-Sen University, I realized that I have to take more care of  about myself. To be honest, this is the first time that I have been was far away from my parents. During my days in at school, I deeply knew that my parents would  will not always be with me accompany with me; they would  will not ask me to do this to do or  that and I must control myself faced with those temptations. I must be independent and careful. Only by doing this can I handle my life in college more effectively. In At the end of the first semester of my freshman year, I went back to my senior high school and almost all my teachers said that I have really grown up. I think being a freshman can has taught train me to become more independent.

3 mars 2015
嗯,改成这个似乎没有那么生硬,谢谢~
3 mars 2015
I think freshman can train me to become more independent 我认为是不是该写成Live alone,specially trained me became more independent.
3 mars 2015
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