Edilma
My city I live in Curitiba, south of the country. we have many parks and many places for fun. Beatiful beach, theaters, musel, bars, restaurants and many options to meet. The Brazil is hot country, but the region south has a good climate . In winter is very cold. Do not like in Europe. Do not we have snow. The city receives many brazilian and foreign tourists. Are welcome!!
3 mars 2015 16:58
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My city

I live in Curitiba, in the south of the country.
We have many parks and many places for fun.
Beatiful beaches, theaters, museums, bars, restaurants and many options to choose from.

The Brazil is a hot country, but the southern region has a good climate . In winter it is very cold. It is not like in Europe. We do not have snow.
The city receives many Brazilian and foreign tourists.

Are welcome!!

3 mars 2015
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8 octobre 2015
Sentence structure is approximately good you have some grammatical problems
3 mars 2015
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