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Nelson Mandela Nelson Mandela has once said:''If you talk to a man in a language he understands that goes to his brain. If you talk to him in his language that goes to his heart''. Nelson Mandela has had a big impact on the modern world. He fought for the equality between black and white people during all his life. He was in prison during twenty-seven years because he wanted to defend his beliefs and he was ready to do everything in his power and he did the sacrifice of his liberty. Mandela scarified his own family to defend his right. It was awful how the government and the authorities of South Africa forbade him to do his job. Nelson Mandela was a lawyer and his office has been moved many times somewhere else. In South Africa, there were neighborhood who was only allow to white people and others only allowed to black people. Black people could not walk through white neighborhood. The government moved the office of Nelson Mandela to forbid black people to get to a lawyer. I have recently read his biography and I found the behavior of the government of South Africa very disgusting. Everybody must be equal. It is not an option.
18 mars 2015 23:34
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Nelson Mandela

Nelson Mandela has once said''If you talk to a man in a language he understands that goes to his brain. If you talk to him in his language that goes to his heart''. Nelson Mandela has had a big impact on the modern world.


He fought for the equality between black and white people during all of his life. He was in prison during for twenty-seven years because he wanted to defend his beliefs and he was ready to do everything in his power and he did the including sacrificing of his own liberty. Mandela scarified his own family to defend his right. It was awful how the government and the authorities of South Africa forbade him to from doing his job. Nelson Mandela was a lawyer and his whose office had been moved many times somewhere else. In South Africa, there were neighborhoods who was only allow to exclusively for white people and others only allowed to for black people. Black people could not walk through white neighborhoods. The government moved the office of Nelson Mandela to forbid prevent black people to from getting to obtaining a lawyer.

I have recently read his biography and I found the behavior of the government of South Africa very disgusting. Everybody must be equal. It is not an option.

 

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in prison  or "imprisoned"

scarified  ??


Vocabulary words: (just in case) apartheid, oppression, repression, segregation, "Civil Disobedience", defiance, "Pass BooK", ...


Nicely written, Mathieu.  Truly Nelson Mandela was a man of integrity to whom we are indebted. All people ARE equal.  Unfortunately not all are regarded or treated equally.

Be sure to ask questions if you have any.  I don't mind at all.

19 mars 2015
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Nelson Mandela

Nelson Mandela has once said:''If you talk to a man in a language he understands that goes to his brain. If you talk to him in his language that goes to his heart''. Nelson Mandela has had a big impact on the modern world.
He fought for the equality between black and white people during all his life. He was in prison during for twenty-seven years because he wanted to defend his beliefs and he was ready to do everything in his power and he did the sacrifice of his liberty. Mandela scarified his own family to defend his right. It was awful how the government and the authorities of South Africa forbade him to do his job. Nelson Mandela was a lawyer and his office has been moved many times somewhere else. In South Africa, there were neighborhoods who was only allow to that only allowed white people and others that only allowed to black people. Black people could not walk through white neighborhoods. The government moved the office of Nelson Mandela to forbid prevent black people to get from getting to a lawyer. I have recently read his biography and I found the behavior of the government of South Africa very disgusting. Everybody must be equal. It is not an option.

19 mars 2015
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