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Happy Easter! I love Easter because I love chocolates! But Easter don't is just chocolates and Easter bunny, is the day that Jesus raised and how christian I can not forget this important day! And on sunday has a Happy Easter!
31 mars 2015 16:30
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Happy Easter!

I love Easter because I love chocolates!
But Easter isn't just about chocolates and the Easter bunny, it's the day that Jesus rose. As a Christian, I cannot forget this important day!

And on Sunday, have a Happy Easter!


<em>Nice writing! There are several options to correct the few mistakes you made. </em>
<em>Happy Easter to you too. :) </em>

31 mars 2015
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Happy Easter!

I love Easter because I love chocolates!
But Easter is not just about chocolates and Easter bunny, but it is the day that Jesus was raised and as a  Christian, I can not forget this important day!

And have a happy easter on sunday!

31 mars 2015
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