Sonia
The little lizard. Please, help me to correct my mistakes, thx! It’s spring now. The flowers are beautiful. Yesterday I went to my garden to tend and to watering the flowers. There are irises, tulips, lilacs, peonies and many others. When I finished my work, I sat down in front of my tool-shed. I relaxed and looked around. Suddenly I saw a little lizard, who had a sunbath on the stone next to me. His skin was glittering in light brown color, his eyes was sparkling black. He looked at me, winked at me, then he ran away. He is my guardian who take care of my garden :)
5 mai 2015 20:15
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The Little Lizard. Please, help me to correct my mistakes, thx!

It’s spring now. The flowers are beautiful. Yesterday, I went to my garden to tend and to and watering the flowers. There are ("There are" is not wrong but "I have" is a nice phrase to put here) irises, tulips, lilacs, peonies and many others. When I finished my work, I sat down in front of my tool-shed. I relaxed and looked around. Suddenly I saw a little lizard, who was taking a sunbath on the stone next to me. His skin was glittering in light brown color. His eyes were sparkling black. He looked at me and winked at me, and then he ran away. He is the guardian who guards my garden. :)

 

Editors note: Great job!

5 mai 2015
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