it's right? i need help.(correct me)

First of all my birthday party was more fun that of my fruend friend rRicardo. My party had a huge barbacue.
We also ate a huge paella with lof lots of meat.
Second Next, I opened the spectacular gifts that my friends
Make  made me. Got me I got a spectacular dress.  We keep kept the party dance more than a spinning top. (unclear... consider "We danced more than spinning tops!")
In conclusion, the my birthday party was the most fun of all.

it's Is it right? I need help.(correct me)

First of all, my birthday party was more fun that of than my friend ricardo's. My Mine had a huge barbecue.
We also ate a huge paella with lot of meat.
Second, I opened the spectacular gifts that from my friends.
Make me.(??)

My friend gave me a spectacular dress. or > I got a spectacular dress.

We keep the party dance more than a spinning top. ?? Maybe: We kept dancing more than a spinning top could spin.
In conclusion, my birthday party was the most fun of all.

It's right? I need help.(correct me)

First of all my birthday party was more funny / had a lot of fun b'coz of my friend Ricardo. Mine / My Party  had a huge barbacue.

We also ate a huge paella with lot of meat.

Second , I opened the spectacular gifts from my friends those made me happy . I also got a spectacular dress. We kept the party on floor with dance more than a spinning top.

In conclusion, the birthday party was an unforgetable moment for me