Sandra
My first Car I buy my fist car the last February in my 25 birthday. This is a sedan '91 its color is as a pearl and I really love it. When I buy it I din't know to drive, so this was on the garage for 2 weeks. Until I told with my friend Nallely and we get way and she gave me a couple lessons. But when I asked her if I can drive to my Job, she told me that NO. That make me feel a little sad. Anyway the next monday I driave to my Job and for 2 days all was OK, but on wednesday I crached twice, the first one with a Taxy then with a miniBAn. My beautiful Sedan now has some scrapes. In this times I have mi drive licence and I had to pint the car.
25 mai 2015 02:43
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My first Car

I bought my first car the last February on my 25 birthday.
It's a '91 sedan. Its color is like a pearl and I really love it. (Or "It's pearl-colored" or "It's the color of a pearl")
When I bought it I didn't know to drive, so it was in the garage for 2 weeks until I told with my friend Nallely and we went way and she gave me a couple of lessons. But when I asked her if I could drive to my job, she told me that NO. That made me feel a little sad. Anyway, the next Monday I drove to my job and for 2 days all (or "everything") was OK, but on Wednesday I crashed twice, the first time with a taxi then with a minivan. My beautiful Sedan now has some scrapes.

Nowadays I have my driver's licence and I had to paint the car.

 

This was really good--glad your car isn't too badly damaged!

25 mai 2015
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My first Car

I bought my first car in the last February on my 25 birthday.
This was a sedan '91 it has pearl color and I really love it.
When I bought it I din't know how to drive. So it had been parked in the garage for 2 weeks.
Then I asked  my friend Nallely to teach me Driving Lession. She gave me a couple of lessons. But when I asked her that am I learned enough  that I can Drive myself.She replied me No. I had to learn and practice more. That made me feel a little sad. Net Monday I had droven my car myself. It was ok till wednesday but then I crashed twice, the first one with a Taxi then with a minivan. My beautiful Sedan now has some scratches.

In this times I have mi drive licence and I had to paint the car.

31 mai 2015
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My first car

I bought my fist car the in last February on my 25th birthday.
This is a Sedan '91. Its color is as a pearl and I really love it.
When I bought it I din't know how to drive, so this was on in the garage for 2 weeks.
Until I told with my friend Nallely and we get way and she gave me a couple lessons. But when I asked her if I could drive to my Job workplace, she told me that NO. That made me feel a little sad. Anyway the next monday, I drove to work my Job and for 2 days all it was OK, but on wednesday I crached twice, the first one with a Taxi then with a miniBAn. My beautiful Sedan now has some scrapes.

In this times I have mi drive licence and I had to pint the car.

It's hard to understand what you mean in this sentence. 

"Pint" what do you mean? 

25 mai 2015
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