Lorena
Something short Hi. Here I'm trying to translate a short paragraph from a book. Hidden for long breaches, the girl was drawing the forest or falling sleep among the leaves. - I know I should not ask me some questions- said the girl. -They have tell me my destinity, my loneliness it's not har, sure, it's only that...- she breathed- each time that I'm in the forest and I lisen that song I feel my stomach shrinking and I wish hug the trees...
30 mai 2015 19:16
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Something short

Hi. Here I'm trying to translate a short paragraph from a book.

Hidden for long breaches, the girl was drawing the forest or falling sleep among the leaves.
I know I should not ask me some questions," said the girl the girl said, "They have tell me my destiny, my loneliness it's not har, sure, it's only that... she breathed each time that I'm in the forest and I listen that song I feel my stomach shrinking and I wish hug the trees..."


Please check the punctuation in a dialogue in English 

30 mai 2015
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