The My First Entry (Note 1)

My name is Petr. I am thirty-six  (Note 2) years old. I live in Moscow. I like to play football. My friends and I play football after work every Monday. I am married and I have two children, a son and a doughter daughter. My son, Dima, has visited the karting  (Note 3) section. He likes cars and speed. His favorite (Note 4)  cartoon (Note  5) hero is Lightning McQueen. My doughter  daughter, Arisha is a (Note  6) young dancer. She has (Note 6) danced in The Central Toys Shop today. It was wonderful. I am proud of my kids.

Notes: 

1) It’s preferrable to capitalise the title.

2) It should be hyphenated.  More examples: fifty-five, seventy-eight, etc.

3) Do you mean “go-karting”?

4) Please note that “favorite” is American English 

while “favourite” British.

5) The word “cartoon” here is used as a modifier, so its singular form should be used, such as “a book shop” in which “book” is singular and it’s a modifier.

6) An indefinite article “a” should be used here to state what type of person your daughter is.

The First Entry

My name is Petr. I am thirty six years old, and I live in Moscow. I like to play football. My friends and I play football after work every Monday. I am married and I have two children, a son and a daughter. My son, Dima, has visited the karting track section. He likes cars and speed. His favorite cartoons hero is Lightning McQueen. My daughter, Arisha is a young dancer. She has danced in The Central Toys Shop today. It was wonderful. I am proud of my kids.