150706 一篇日记: 我的新爱好
你好,朋友们，
我今天要告诉你们关于我的新的爱好：跑步。
我打算明年跟一些朋友们在参加一个有点儿难叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛一起跑步。
在 “MDS” ，我们要为了在撒哈拉大沙漠跑有6天，全程大概241公里. 在第4个天对手们得跑步80公里。有人说它是最难的世界级的竞赛！
我小时候总是爱大生物很爱运动，不过可惜最近我没很怎么锻炼！3个星期以前我开始了我的训练，我发现了我很喜欢跑步！
现在我发现散步只跑步20公里特别难，不过我知道跟只要努力一切皆有可能! haha.
我对你们的爱好非常有感兴趣！你们在周末怎么玩儿？
谢谢和再见！
亚瑟
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Hello friends,
Today I want to tell you about my new hobby: running.
Next year I and a few friends are planning to run a race called the "Marathon des Sables" together.
In the "MDS" we have 6 days to run about 241km through the Sahara desert. On the fourth day alone we have to run 80km. Some people say it's the hardest race in the world!
Since I was small I've always loved sport but recently I haven't exercised very much! Three weeks ago I began my training and discovered that I love running!
At the moment I find running 20km extremely difficult but I know that with hard work anything is possible! haha.
I'm super interested in your hobbies. How do you enjoy your weekends?
Thank you and see you!
Arthur
150706 一篇日记: 我新的爱好
你好,朋友们:
我今天要告诉你们关于我的新的爱好：跑步。
我明年打算跟一些朋友们在一个有点儿难(/挑战), 叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛中,一起跑步。
在 “MDS” 中, 我们有要在6天內为了跑(步)大概241公里在通过撒哈拉大沙漠。 (光是)在第4个天对选手们就得跑(步)80公里。有人说它是<em>世界上</em>最难的竞赛！
我小时候总是爱大生物运动, 不过可惜最近我没很常锻炼！3个星期以前我开始了我的训练和, 并且我发现了我很喜欢跑步！
现在(/此时)我发现散跑步仅20公里就特别难(/十分困难); 不过我知道跟努力下,一切皆有可能! haha.
我对你们的爱好非常有兴趣！你们在周末怎么玩儿？
谢谢和再见！
亚瑟
*** You should notice the punctuation that will affect the meaning in a sentence. For example, "有点儿难叫(的)~" without any punctuation means something (the race) a little bit hard to call. But if it's the way I did, "有点儿(困)难, 叫(做)~的" means the race has challenge and is called ~. On the other hand, your English and Chinese don't somewhat match so it's difficult to make my choice of the words and expressions.
150706 一篇日记: 我新的爱好
你好朋友们，
我今天要告诉你们关于我的新的爱好：跑步。
我明年打算跟一些朋友们在一个有点儿难参加一个叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛一起跑步。
在 “MDS” 我们有6天为了在撒哈拉大沙漠跑步大概241公里. 在第4个天对手们每个人得跑步80公里。有人说它是最难的世界的竞赛！
我小时候总是爱大生物运动不过可惜最近我没很锻炼！3个星期以前我开始了我的训练和并且我发现了我很喜欢跑步！
现在我发现散步跑步只20公里特别难，不过我知道跟只要努力一切皆有可能! haha.
我对你们的爱好非常有兴趣！你们在平时周末怎么玩儿？
谢谢和再见！
亚瑟
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Hello friends,
Today I want to tell you about my new hobby: running.
Next year I and a few friends are planning to run a race called the "Marathon des Sables" together.
In the "MDS" we have 6 days to run about 241km through the Sahara desert. On the fourth day alone we have to run 80km. Some people say it's the hardest race in the world!
Since I was small I've always loved sport but recently I haven't exercised very much! Three weeks ago I began my training and discovered that I love running!
At the moment I find running 20km extremely difficult but I know that with hard work anything is possible! haha.
I'm super interested in your hobbies. How do you enjoy your weekends?
Thank you and see you!
Arthur
