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Compare two people's tastes in fashion My friend "G" and I didn’t have similarity on tastes in fashion. We were not on the same boat at all. He always humiliated me for my appearance and my vision to fashion. But sometimes I joking him for his always formal dressing taste. On the opposite of his side I always tend to wear casual and colorful clothes, but he liked to wear formal and calm colors like black and gray. He was tall about 188cm, and everything he wore looked fantastic and it goes to him whereas I should have chosen clothes which showed me taller than I am. I told him several time that jealous of him because of his stature. But he never told me anything at all about mine. I've spend so much money on clothes sometime It coasted me an arm and a leg but he bought his clothes by his mean all the time. I'm a little eccentric on choosing cloth on work, casual and comfort, because of my taste of the 80's. And moreover due to my activity in fact hyperactivity, I feel warmth great deal of time. However G used to wear formal suits just like plenty of people that tend to wear an elegant and chic suit on their works. My friend, G had a lot of great and beautiful tie whereas I never had more than four. He had some shiny and striking suit, I never had them and I always joking him for his taste and also he couldn't agree mine. I've never been such a fan of fashions that follow channels, pages, magazine, and their lane but instead I tend to wear like a punk and grunge people who lived on 80s and 90's. Both of us didn't pay attention too much on our appearance hence we resist to dyed hair or cosmetic surgery. Another similarity that I want to consider is that both of us wore flashy and loud t-shirts when we were together and laugh to each other. But after he has gone my taste completely changed and it goes to wear what he'd liked.
25 juil. 2015 15:11
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I've I have never been such a fan of following fashions that follow from TV channels, pages, magazines, and their lane  so on but instead I tend prefer to wear dress like a punk and grunge people who lived on in the 80s and 90's. Both of us didn't pay attention Neither of us used to pay too much attention to too much on our appearances hence we resisted to dyed hair or cosmetic surgery. Another similarity that I want to consider mention is that both of us wore would wear flashy and loud t-shirts when we were together and laughed to with each other. But after since he has gone my taste has completely changed and it goes to wear tends more towards what he'd he would have liked.

 

I have never been a fan of following fashions from TV or magazines and so on, instead I prefer to dress like a punk or in a grunge style from the 80s and 90s. Neither of us used to pay too much attention to our appearances hence we resisted dying our hair or cosmetic surgery. Another similarity I want to mention is that both of us would wear flashy and loud t-shirts when we were together and would laugh with each other. But since he has gone my taste has completely changed and tends more towards what he would have liked.

 

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19 août 2015
Hi Navid, because of the way you have written about your friend in the past tense it sounds like he is no longer with us. I am not sure if this is what you wanted to convey.
19 août 2015

I'm I am a little eccentric on choosing in my choice of clothing on for work, casual leisure and comfort, because of my taste of the 80's taste. And m Moreover, due to my activity in fact hyperactivity being active or even hyperactive, I tend to feel warmth warm a great deal of time. However G. used to wear formal suits just like plenty of other people that tend to wear an elegant and chic suit on their works to work. My friend, G. had a lot of great and beautiful great-looking ties whereas I never had more than four. He had some shiny and striking suits, I never had them which I never had. and I always used to jokeing with him for about his taste and also he couldn't agree with mine.

 

I am a little eccentric in my choice of clothing for work, leisure and comfort because of my 80's taste. Moreover, due to being active or even hyperactive, I tend to feel warm a great deal of the time. However G. used to wear formal suits just like plenty of other people that wear an elegant and chic suit to work. My friend G. had a lot if great-looking ties whereas I never had more than four. He had some striking suits which I never had. I always used to joke with him about his taste and he couldn't agree with mine.

 

* 'work, casual and comfort' - 'casual' is an adjective so 'leisure' works better.

* 'I feel warm' not 'I feel warmth'.

19 août 2015

Compare two people's tastes in fashion

 

My friend "G" and I didn’t have never had similarity on tastes in fashion. We were not on the same boat wavelength at all. He always humiliated used to humiliate joke about me for my appearance and my vision to fashion fashion sense. But sometimes I joking  would joke with him for his constantly always formal dressing taste sense. On the opposite of his side Unlike him I always tend to wear casual and colorful clothes, but he liked to wear formal and calm colors like black and gray. He was tall, about 188cm, and everything he wore looked fantastic great and it goes to him suited him whereas I should have chosen had to choose clothes which showed me made me look taller than I am. I told him several times that I was jealous of him because of his stature height., Bbut he never told me said anything at all about mine. I've spend so much money on clothes sometime I it coasted me an arm and a leg Clothing used to cost me an arm and a leg but he bought his clothes by his mean all the time always spent within his means.

 

My friend G. and I never had similar taste in fashion. We were not on the same wavelength at all. He always used to joke about my appearance and my fashion sense, but sometimes I would joke with him for his constantly formal dress sense.  Unlike him I always tend to wear casual and colorful clothes, but he liked to wear formal and calm colors like black and gray. He was tall, about 188cm, and everything he wore looked great and suited him whereas I had to choose clothes which made me looke taller than I am. I told him several times that I was jealous of him because of his height, but he never said anything at all about mine. Clothing used to cost me an arm and a leg but he always spent within his means.

 

* To be 'in the same boat' as someone is to have a similar problem, to be in a similar predicament, but fashion sense is not a problem so that expression does not quite work here (even though I know what you meant). 'On the same wavelength' describes having the same opinion as someone.

* taste <em>'in</em> fashion' not <em>'on</em> fashion'.

* 'stature' is not wrong here but 'height' sounds more natural.

* I like your use of 'an arm and a leg'.

* 'bought his clothes by his mean', this would be 'according to his means', 'spent within his means' works better. You could even use an idiom here, 'cut your coat according to your cloth', 'he always used to cut his coat according to his cloth'.

19 août 2015
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