Daylane Martins
Learning English Hi! My name is Daylane and I am in Italki because I want só much learn a new language, for I have a dream of traveling and, primaly, to know The Wizarding World of Harry Potter, in Orlando, and this times the English helps a lot.
31 juil. 2015 01:14
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Learning English

Hi!
My name is Daylane and I am in Italki because I want só much learn a new language, for I have a dream of traveling and, primaly, to know The Wizarding World of Harry Potter, in Orlando, and this times the English helps a lot.

Hi!
My name is Daylane and I am on (1) itaki because I want só much to (2) learn a new language, because of my (3) dream of traveling and, primarily, to get (4) know The Wizarding World of Harry Potter in Orlando, and this times the English will help me (5) a lot in that (6).

(1) A prepozição correta.

(2) Depois dos verbos want, need, like ... sempre se usa a particula to.

(3) Por causa de...

(4) "To get know" or "to visit" é melhor neste caso.

(5) Fala sobre o futuro.

(6) ... vai me muito ajudar nisso ...

 

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31 juillet 2015
Thank you!
31 juillet 2015
i hope you realize your dream! best wishes!
31 juillet 2015
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