A Chinese girl 's problem while learning English
I am a Chinese girl who (, i) started to learn English (when i was) at primary school. Recently, I have encountered (But i met) a problem. (now, well,) You may know (,) that in China, we have examination-orientated (examnation-oriented) education, so until now I have been able to (i can) get a good grade in exams, even though (but) my listening and spoken English is really poor. I don't know what's the use of getting (meaning of) those good marks for my (or) excellent ability at (of) reading English articles, I mean I can't even (can't) communicate (communcate) or express myself in English, that's ridicious! Although I feel depressed, (for this, but) the good news is at least I am working on it right now, better late (later is better) than never, right? I am trying to overcome those difficulties. I have confidence in myself that I'll (, i'll) make it, just need a little more time.^^
I am sure that with more focus you will improve your levelof speech. Your article was well constructed and worded. Your main issue seems to be with the letter I and words formed from it such as I'll which should alwaysbe written in capitals. It is a relatively simple mistake to rectify and will mean six less errors. Good luck!
A Chinese girl 's problem while learning English
I am a Chinese girl. I started to learn (or "I started learning") English when I was in primary school. But I have a problem now. Well, you know, in China, we have an examination-oriented education, so until now I could get a good grade on an exam, but my listening and spoken English is still really poor. I don't know what the meaning is of those good marks or of an excellent ability to reading English articles. I mean I can't even communicate or express myself in English, that's ridiculous! I feel depressed by this, but the good news is at least I am working on it right now, later is better than never, right? I am trying to overcome those difficulties. I have confidence in myself, I'll make it, I just need a little more time.^^
I definitely think you will make it. You are off to a good start, and good reading skills will help.



