Rehab Shaban
Is it correct,please ? Is it correct,please ? (My Dear Alexander supertramp, If I had your half courage, if I could be liberated from all the constraints .. from my meaningless life , I would finally test the real meaning of the life away from this Killer community. Peace for your free soul .)
3 sept. 2015 13:02
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Is it correct,please ?

Is this correct,please ?
(My Dear Alexander supertramp, If I had half your courage, if I could be liberated from all the constraints .. from my meaningless life , I would finally test the real meaning of life away from this Killer community. Peace to your free soul .)

 

 

Well written! Just a couple of mistakes but it did not displace the essence and purpose of your message. 

3 septembre 2015
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