Eavan Kim
my daily life 1. Last night, I had overworked with my staffs in my office. Although I had a plan to go somewhere my wife want to go, I couldn't stop working. Next week, I am scheduled to go to another country for business trip. Until that time, I have to end remaining works(jobs). At dawn, my jobs was finished. I slept for a few hours. I was exhausted and but I should try to keep promise. My family went to Mask dancing festival held in Andong city. 2. Remaining jobs were lots. Suddenly I felt I had to organize my jobs in list. First I listed my jobs, Second I set priority on my jobs.
4 oct. 2015 15:14
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my daily life

1.
Last night at my office, Me and my coworkers worked overtime. 

Although I had a planned to go somewhere else with my wife, I couldn't stop working.

Next week, I am scheduled to go to foreign country for business trip.
Until that time, [I have to end remaining works(jobs).] -Not sure what you're try to say

At 6am, the jobs I had to do were done. I slept for a few hours.
I was exhausted and but I was trying to keep my promise.

My family went to Mask dancing festival in Andong city.

2.
[Remaining jobs were lots]-kind of confusing I think you meant [you still had many jobs left, that still you have to do]

Suddenly I felt I had to organize my jobs in list.
First I listed my jobs, Second I set priority on my jobs.

 

This was pretty good, with very few mistakes.

Keep trying hard! Bye bye.

4 octobre 2015
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