Best wishes I would like to wish everyone to have more time. Time is the most important thing but always missing. In the next year I wish you to live your time as you want it: maybe time to smile, t

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Best wishes I would like to wish everyone to have more time. Time is the most important thing but always missing. In the next year I wish you to live your time as you want it: maybe time to smile, to think, time to give it to others. I wish you time to find yourself, to live your every day, every time you as a gift. Summary of poetry Elli Michler "I wish you time"

30 déc. 2015 21:15

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Best wishes

I would like to wish for everyone to have more time.
Time is the most important thing, but is always missing lacking. In this next year I wish for you to live spend your time as you want it: maybe take time to smile, to think, to give share it to with others. I wish you time to find yourself,
to live your every each day, every time hour you as [if it were] a gift.
Summary of poetry Elli Michler's poem, "I wish you time"

Poetry is difficult to translate. I tried to keep as much of your translation as possible with my corrections. I did add some words in brackets on the last line because in more poetic language these words can be omitted and understood, but it is good to know what words are being left out Nice job.

30 décembre 2015

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