What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? The life of small villages is not the same things as living in big cities. Many people are interesting living sm

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What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? The life of small villages is not the same things as living in big cities. Many people are interesting living small community because they see huge benefits from that. However, the drawback should not forgotten. Let’s take the advantages into consideration. First of all, the atmosphere is very clear and fresh. People will feel comfortable, especially is old person’s heath. Secondly, although there are not a lot of relationships, people know each other so much, understand deeply do they support and helped when having problems. Their emotion becomes closet and harmony, no one ever feel lonely It’s necessary to say that life is very peaceful here when the children grow up in stable environment. They are taught a good behavior, being polite and respectful . More ever, there are a little crime the parent never think a lot when their children can play safety in the street. This is a simple life but it is very happy. However there are a lot of disadvantages occurring when living a small villages. Life is probably difficult for everyone to build study environment . The majority of furnitures is almost poor in school. This means that the study progress of children will be weaker than the others one in city. In addition, most parents are farmer so they have less money because of low salary. Therefore, there will be less money for children’s education. Also, young people have ambitious, they have to move away to study and work. It’s not convenient to travel and visit their home. And last but not least, when living a small, your relationship are limited. You are only a narrow space where you can not have many chances to develop your ability. All in all, I think people from villages are very peace of mind. However, it’s not enough in the modern world to exist with well-heathy . Living in a large city also does not deny very necessary.

11 janv. 2016 23:11

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You <strike>are</strike> only have a <strike>narrow</strike> small space where you can not have many chances to develop your <strike>ability</strike> abilities.
<strike>All in all</strike> In conclusion, I think people from villages <strike>are</strike> have a <strike>very</strike> peace of mind. However, it’s not enough <strike>in the modern world</strike> to exist with the well-healthy in the modern world. Living in a large city <strike>also does not deny very necessary</strike> (is not necessarily perfect either.)

Not exactly sure what you wanted to say in the last two sentences.

But good job! I like your points as well (:

11 janvier 2016

What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

The life <strike>of</strike> in small villages is not the same thing<strike>s</strike> as living in big cities. Many people are <strike>interesting</strike> interested in living in a small community because they see huge benefits from that. However, the drawback should not forgotten.
Let’s take the advantages into consideration. First of all, the atmosphere is very clear and fresh. People will feel comfortable, especially <strike>is</strike> considering an old person’s health. Secondly, although there are not a lot of relationships, people know each other so <strike>much</strike> well. They deeply understand <strike>deeply</strike> each other and <strike>do</strike> they support and help<strike>ed</strike> each other when <strike>having</strike> they have problems. Their emotions become<strike>s</strike> <strike>closet</strike> closer and in harmony. No one will ever feel lonely. It’s necessary to say that life is very peaceful here when the children grow up in stable environment. They are taught <strike>a</strike> to have good behavior, to be <strike>being</strike> polite and to be respectful. <strike>More ever</strike> In addition, there <strike>are</strike> is <strike>a</strike> little crime. The parents will never <strike>think a lot</strike> have to worry when their children can play safety in the street. This is a simple life but it is very happy.
However there are a lot of disadvantages occurring when living <strike>a</strike> in small villages. <strike>Life</strike> It is probably difficult for everyone to build study environment. The majority of the furniture<strike>s</strike> is <strike>almost</strike> poor in school. This means that the study progress of children will be weaker than <strike>the others one</strike> those in a city. In addition, most parents are farmers so they have less money because of low salary. Therefore, there will be less money for children’s education. Also, young people <strike>have</strike> are ambitious. They have to move away to study and work. It’s not convenient to travel and visit their home. And last but not least, when living a small community, your relationships are limited.

11 janvier 2016

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