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Peacekeeping Mission. 2
XX comes from Sweden, a country well known for its contribution to the peace in the world. The day XX was buried, all around the country, Swedish people had been observing* a moment of silence.During XX was XX, the current XX** which, at that time was a student chair at an elementary school send him a letter to express his support for the people from Eastern Europe and Hungary. It was the time of the revolutions and the struggle for human rights and democracy in that part of the world.
*or, had observed a moment...
**"XX may be defined as the subject in which we never know what we are talking about, nor whether what we are saying is true”, Bertie Russell.
Peacekeeping Mission. 2
XX comes from Sweden, a country well known for his its {or "her", but never masculine} contribution to the peace in the world. The day XX was buried, all around the country, Swedish people had been observed a moment of silence.
During XX was XX, the current XX who,* at that time, was a student chair at an elementary school, sent him a letter to express his support to for the people from Eastern Europe and Hungary. It was the time of the revolution,s path in fighting for human rights and democracy in this part of the world. **
*I'm reading XX as a person, since he was a "student chair". In this case, because it's a person, we say "who".
**There's a lost precision here when I took out "path" from the sentence. If I understand it's intent correctly, I would rewrite this sentence as: "It was a time when revolution and the fight for human rights and democracy had swept this part of the world."
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