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Peacekeeping Mission. 3 Today, 50th years later, in the opinion of the current XX, things haven’t changed so far sadly. Nowadays the fight for the democracy and the freedom expression spread out particularly in Arab countries, and North Africa. People still stand up for their democratic rights and fight for their political voices. XX is an example of sensibility and sincerity in the political sphere. In his message to the public, XX stressed that we should together uphold what XX commenced.

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Peacekeeping Mission. 3

Today, 50th years later, in the opinion of the current XX, things sadly haven’t changed so far sadly. Nowadays the fight for the democracy and the freedom of expression is spreading, out particularly in Arab countries, and North Africa. People still stand up for their democratic rights and fight for their political voices.

XX is an example of sensibility and sincerity in the political sphere. In his message to the public, XX stressed that we should together uphold what XX commenced.
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Peacekeeping Mission. 3

Today, 50th years later, in the opinion of the current XX, things haven’t changed so far {or "thus far"}, sadly.* Nowadays, the fight for the democracy and the freedom of expression has spread (out,)** particularly in to Arab countries, and North Africa. People still stand up for their democratic rights and fight for their political voices.

XX is an example of sensibility and sincerity in the political sphere. In his message to the public, XX stressed that we should together to uphold what XX commenced*** {better: "started"}.

 

*As written, this suggests that things haven't changed *at all*. If you mean that things haven't changed enough, then it's "things haven't changed so much / very much.

**It reads better without "out", but if you prefer to keep it in, the comma is needed.

***"Commenced" is okay, but it tends to be used more for formal writing.

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