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This is how I would probably write it to sound the most "natural" --
TV shows
A good TV show can sometimes give you a new lease on life. For example, I became incredibly determined to fulfill my lifelong ambition after I watched a documentary on the founder of the Ford Motor Company, Henry Ford. Through nothing more than hard work and perseverance, Ford was able to produce a revolutionary automobile.Television
TV is able to give us a new lease on life. For instance, I was so bound and determined to fulfill my lifelong ambition when I watched a documentary on the founder of Ford Motor Company life, Henry Ford. Through hard work and perseverance, Ford worked his way up to producing a revolutionary motor.The grammar is excellent! The only errors are semantic:
"New lease on life" means a fresh start. Typically, one would use this idiom if they were close to giving up and then saw something that re-invigorated them. If you were already determined to fulfill your lifelong ambition, then you didn't need a new lease on life.
"So bound and determined" is typically followed by "that ____________." For example, I was so bound and determined to pass the test that I stayed up all night studying.
Ford didn't work his way up. This implies that he started in an entry-level or low-level position and was gradually promoted through the company. Ford started his own company after building engines in his garage.
I hope this helps! Idioms can be extremely hard to use correctly!
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