The Benefits Of Sports
Hello again! Today, I want to talk about sports and its benefits. In my life, I have always done lots of different sports, like swimming, rugby, volleyball, basketball, and cycling. After each workout session, I feel rejuvenated; I actually have a very low heartbeat, but working ten hours a day and being an Italian tutor, I have no time for sports. I hate this situation, I would work less if I could, but I have a family to take care of, and it's not always easy. Fortunately, tomorrow I am going to the fist basketball practice with a team made up of people in my same situation.
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the benefits of sports
Hello again!Today I want to talk about sports and their benefits.
During my life, I had always done a lot of sports, like swim, rugby, volleyball, basketball and cycles .
After each training session, I feel regenerate. Actually, I have very low heartbeats, but working 10 hours per day and doing Italian tutor, I have no time for sports.
I hate this situation. I would (without to )work less but I have a family to maintain and it's no easy.
Fortunately tomorrow I going to the first basketball training with a friendly team. This team is composed by people in my same situation.
