I'm making on web site. I'd like to post following sentences. Could you check them? Do you like Japanese cuisine? Do you know how to cook them? I'll teach you how to cook healthy and a well-blanced

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I'm making on web site. I'd like to post following sentences. Could you check them? Do you like Japanese cuisine? Do you know how to cook them? I'll teach you how to cook healthy and a well-blanced diet. You are what you eat. If you cook readily at home, you'll be happy and health everyday. Please don't worry! It's pretty easy. Also you can know about Japanese culture more deeply. Cooking beginners are welcome. Let's enjoy cooking and eating together!

12 nov. 2016 13:11

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Do you like Japanese cuisine? Do you know how to cook them Japanese dishes?

I'll teach you how to cook healthy and have a well-blanced diet. You are what you eat.
If you cook readily at home, you'll be happy and healthy everyday.
Please don't worry! It's pretty easy.
Also, you can know learn more about Japanese culture.
Cooking Beginners are welcome. Let's enjoy cooking and eating together!

(Sounds like a interesting website entry, Yoshie~san.)

12 novembre 2016

Ms. Athena, Thank you so much!

12 novembre 2016

Good idea

12 novembre 2016

It looks really well!!! If you plan on teaching about Japanese cuisine you might want to say "Also you can learn about" instead of "Also you can know about"

12 novembre 2016

Vous souhaitez progresser plus vite ?

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